The reader got a clear picture of what the author has been working. The writer also explains why it was essential and the teams thought process when the power-up was developed and made it a reality. The reader also got a sense what the writer encountered when he created the power-up, how the power-up became a suicide by making all of the enemies targeting the player. The reader would personally like a bit more on how that problem was solved because that part as it would be interesting to see the solution to that problem. The blog explains the creation of the power-up satisfyingly, but a bit more in-depth analysis of the creation would elevate the blog standard a fair bit, mainly because the reader would get a more in-depth understanding of the creators’ struggles and breaks through.
All in all: an excellent post that explains the creation of the power-up with solid arguments why and how it was done. However, it lacked a bit in depth and details in the how department.
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